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This is very solid work. I like that you’ve put in a little extra effort to find additional sources on the topic, and you do a fine job of asserting your own position in opposition to Carr’s. The one main shortcoming of the paper at the moment is that I’m not convinced you’re really addressed the central element of Carr’s argument. He doesn’t worry about the internet damaging our ability to memorize, but rather our ability to read deeply. I think that you can successfully rebut this notion, but you’ll need to acknowledge and respond to it more directly than you have so far.

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