discussion 100-200 words

you will take the opportunity to ask any questions about your upcoming research paper and receive responses from your peers. For example, you can ask about one of your sources; you can ask a question about MLA formatting; you can provide your thesis and receive some feedback on that; etc.Now that you have read the Research Paper Student Sample Essays and received feedback on your rough draft, reply to this thread in 100-200 words, and ask 1-2 questions you still have about the research paper. Include a word count in parentheses at the end of your thread.

Here are the three most pressing things to work on for your final draft:

-Aim for an introduction, 3-5 body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Right now, you have too many paragraph breaks and should not be labeling any of your sections.
-You need 4-6 current and credible sources. Right now, your sources are not credible. Review the “Researching Credible Sources” handout for more clarification on this. Avoid web sites.
-All sources should be quoted or paraphrased in text and those references should be green. I need to be able to tell the difference between your ideas and the ones from your sources.